Best part of me

Learning Intentions

I am learning to use language features to make my writing interesting and engaging for the reader.

I am learning to think carefully about the words I use so that my writing is descriptive and engaging for the reader.

I am learning to add an appropriate visual to my work

I will be successful when I can show….

-I have used some language features to make my writing interesting and engaging (smile, metaphor, alliteration, onomatopoeia, rhyme)

-I have carefully chosen some interesting words to include in my writing

-I have some descriptive words in my writing (adjectives)

-I have added a photo to my writing

My legs are as fast as a cheetah on a mission.
They hikoi me through the path of life. They bound. They Swing.
They’re mine and that’s fine cause they’re mine.
I love my legs because they are strong and solid .
The wheua (bones) in my legs are like roots clinging to my hips.
My legs make me come tuatahi, tuarua and tuatoru.
Everyday they grow more tough, make me have a bounce in my step.
They thud in mud. My legs shine in the sunlight. They jump nui ditches.
My legs are as tanned and olive as a bronze medal in the Olympics.
I love my legs because they’re mine!