Here is my writing about a trip to the Arahura Marae I went on.
This is a piece of writing that retells and evaluates (what you think) events or experiences.
Title
A brief name for the experience or event.
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Arahura Marae
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Orientation
Tells when and where the event began and who was there.
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Last week on Thursday the senior school went to the Arahura marae. We went in the morning and separated to travel to the marae in separate cars. I traveled with my mum and a few room 1 girls. we are going to learn about staying on a marae. I was feeling excited. I was not nervous at all.We got to the marae at approximately 9:45.
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Sequence of events
Tells the events in the order they happened.
You need to have a minimum of 3-4 events. Remember one topic per paragraph. Your paragraph should have an introductory sentence use a time sequence word/phrase and then detail.
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After, arriving we were welcomed onto the amazing beautiful marae with a powhiri. For the powhiri a woman called out from the marae and Miss Ireland answered in maori like the other lady. This is called a karanga. It sounded beautiful. All the people walked forward. After that we went inside and the men did a kind of walking- non-action haka. This is called a whaikōrero. A whaikōrero is a speech of welcome.
Next, we had the morning tea and it was delicious. There were tonnes of savouries and some fruit. There were also some very popular sandwiches which most people enjoyed.There were beautiful green and black table runners to match the colours of the marae. It had amazing lights in the dining room.
After that, we all went into the wharenui to share our mihi. There was about 80 people who shared their mihi. A few people mucked up! I was one of them. It took a long time to get through everyone-about 1 hour , but it was nice to know a few things about everyone.
Next we had lunch. For lunch we had to bring our own and there was a huge deck for everyone to sit on . I sat with my friends.
After that, we walked down to the river and tried to find pounamu. Some people ended up finding amazing pieces of pounamu. We had about an hour to try and find a piece of pounamu. Soon after that we walked further on to the beach and had a taniwha sculpture competition and my group came nothing. My group did a 3D taniwha but it just was a head and it had no body. We used whatever was on the beach to make our taniwha.
Next was dinner. When we got back, we stayed in the marae and played a few games before dinner. I played uno with a few friends. When it was dinner time we went into the room where we have dinner in and ate dinner. For dinner we had potato, chicken, and loads more. I got served heaps!
After dinner we all went outside to do the evening activities. The activities some people were in were: Rippa rugby, Ki o rahi,Weaving,Tukutuku and soap carving. I was in Tukutuku and Soap carving.There were a lot of adults that helped with these activities. I enjoyed the soap carving better because you had to think of Māori patterns not English patterns. I heard that in Ki o rahi you did the game Ki o rahi for half an hour and then you did rakau throwing.It was a fun thing to do. We ended the evening activities at 9:00.
Soon after that we were roasting marshmallows and making them into s'mores by a fire. The s’mores were really good. We sang waiata while we were eating them.
Finally we got into bed and MOST of us went to sleep. I was not one of them. They must of had the heaters on a hundred because it was SO, SO, SO hot inside.
When it was morning(6:00) we packed up and played some games. I played Uno with my friends. We did that until 8:00-breakfast!
For breakfast I had a milo and some nutri grain and yogurt. There were lots of things you could choose to have.
After breakfast We packed up and said what we liked. I said that I liked The poupou (carvings). I like the poupou because they have lots of designs in each poupou. After that we left.
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Personal Comment/Ending
Tells how the experience/event ended and some thoughts you may have about it.
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I really liked the marae and I would 100 % go again. It was really fun and the food was great.
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